Here are our second attempts at spoken poetry. How do you feel you've improved?
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lilly
2/12/2016 02:21:38 am
I think i has very good with my actions and I think I could do better at my expression because when I compered mia's and main I sow that mia was so good at her expression I want to be like that too. So I am going to try and work on that and practice and get better.
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Abe
2/15/2016 03:21:16 am
I think this poem was better than the last one. But I don't think I said it with energy so next time I will practice more and say it with more energy.
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Last time I did this I had a book in front of me so I wasn't prepared. I had only just published a bit of my poem and I wasn't impressed. I did not do as well and I didn't have as much time. This time I did a lot of better things. I think if I do this I can include actions and love. I think I did a better job though. I am happy that I finished this poem. I am kinda proud of this final production but I know I can do better. I hope we can do this for I enjoyed it a lot. It was an interesting change and fun subject.
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Beth
2/18/2016 12:27:41 am
The previous time we did our spoken poetry poems we didn't have that long to prepare them so that was one improvement for everyone. An improvement wich I noticed in my poem was that at parts the poem just didn't make sense.
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Georgios
2/19/2016 04:53:30 am
I think this one is better than the one before because I used more expression and I looked happy but before I was looking board and I had lots of mistakes but what I think I can do better is speak louder and if I say a word I should do a long notice for example ssnakessssss that's how I'd say it.
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Mia
2/22/2016 07:10:51 am
I think i improved because
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Hanna
2/23/2016 08:20:19 am
I think I have improved by adding more interesting words, and by having more expression and attitude, by talking loud and clear not pausing too much, even though some of it was cut out (probably because I made some mistake that I can't remember) But all in all I think my second time performing was better than the first one.
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Sara
2/23/2016 07:56:02 pm
I think i improved with my voice and enthusiasm /expression
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Dzidzor
2/23/2016 08:43:15 pm
I used a bit more expression and I used more energy, since I had more time to practice I did not stop in the middle. Miss Pearl helped me put more interesting words in my colour poem so I think I improved well with that too
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Nabeel
2/24/2016 04:03:29 am
I think spoke louder and I had more expression in my speech.I think because I memorized it I could speak quicker but also more clearer.
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Dev
2/24/2016 08:16:51 am
I think I have used more attitude and I used much more rhyme which again links to having the right attitude.I think I also memorized my poem but I looked up too much so I will try to improve to keep my contact on the camera.
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suryansh
2/25/2016 03:59:23 am
My poem is not shoing
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